The only reason any of these posts get made is because I make them! Wow! If you've ever been interested in the behind-the-scenes stuff, this is the post for you.
However, for something like a story, you need to be a little more concise. It's important to do more with less if you want to keep people interested in your plot. That isn't to say you shouldn't take the time to tell a joke or to add in a scene that's not incredibly relevant.